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Listen to me by ~Just-Jo:iconJust-Jo:





You know, that I used to be like you
So tired of life, like there was nothing left to do
Saying goodbye to all your real friends
So you would be prepared for your life to end
But you were to impatient to wait
You didn’t believe in fate
So you stayed up late that night
You had enough time to write
A letter that says goodbye forever
To tell them to not try to find you, never
Because you wouldn’t be alive anymore
And they couldn’t stop you even before
But please listen to me
This is not how it has to be
And first ask yourself why
Because it may be hard to live, but it’s harder to die
©2005-2008 ~Just-Jo
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Submitted: Apr 27, 2005
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This is the Poem: Listen. Only with another background, I am stil searching for the background I would like to have, be patient please:)

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~blue-phoenix27:iconblue-phoenix27: Apr 28, 2005, 5:04:15 AM
wow. =D love the poem. it's good to sing it. but.... in a sad way i guess.
~Just-Jo:iconJust-Jo: Apr 28, 2005, 6:25:41 AM
thank you:)

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my lips are sealed
~three-planes:iconthree-planes: Apr 28, 2005, 6:27:45 AM
Touching.

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"We must learn to live together as brothers or perish together as fools." -Martin Luther King, Jr.
"I want to know God's thoughts; the rest are details."-Einstein
I am Ra's al Ghul
~MadamKistulot:iconMadamKistulot: Apr 29, 2005, 12:15:08 AM
lovely :)

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You have just read the rants and ravings of a lunatic.

I'm very, very sorry.
~Just-Jo:iconJust-Jo: Apr 29, 2005, 4:20:53 AM
thanks:) :glomp:

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:wave:'s forever ^^;
*seraphik:iconseraphik: Apr 30, 2005, 1:08:08 AM
I like your poems! :hug: They're sad but encouraging at the same time, and that's hard to do with writing. Keep it up!

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~Just-Jo:iconJust-Jo: Apr 30, 2005, 1:12:02 AM
Thank you! :hug:

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~Gadiena:iconGadiena: May 5, 2005, 7:54:36 AM
It's beautiful. It's sad but it gives you the feeling that you can go on and be happy. :)

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:evillaugh: •·*!It's a Dark Thing, You wouldn't Understand!*·• :evillaugh:
~Just-Jo:iconJust-Jo: May 5, 2005, 9:37:55 AM
:) :hug: thanks for the fav!:)

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